Sorry to be discouraging, but I don’t think you can make much progress without a live instructor.
The best translation is Terry Pinkard, available on the web. There are no commentaries or secondary readings I can recommend.
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>i am a former philosophy student at ucla. a few other former students and
> myself are interested in reading the phenomenlogy of spirit. could you
> recommend a specific translation, a good companion reader, and any other
> secondary texts that would help us get through it.
> thank you,